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Jack TS #10


During this session, Giancarlo and I continued to go over his application essay for graduate school, the deadline for which was approaching quickly. He had written quite a bit more since our last meeting, and we were able to go a lot deeper in depth about common patterns in Giancarlo’s mistakes (article use, direct translations, etc.) and ways to make the writing sound more formal. We also went over some of the grammar errors in his writing, which he was still making. This was a little disappointing as we had gone over this already, but I know it can take some time for the skills to set. However, Giancarlo was able to pick up on his mistakes more quickly this time around. He is identifying his mistakes after he has made them, which is okay for an application essay draft, but an obstacle to face when writing a GRE essay. I reminded Giancarlo to talk to experts about the content of the essay and help get tips on the best ways to get his point across and sell himself in order to get the best essay.

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